Do you like to travel with your mother? Why or why not?

2019-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 James

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I like to travel with my mom. That is beacuse I don\'t mind to use the money during traveling. I have experienced taveling with my mom before. We haven\'t any argue and we got along well. But, in another side, I couldn\'t play some extrem activities together. If doing alone, I nomally feel less excited. So, that point was a little bit sad point. As a result, I prefer to travel with my mom.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this [이름]:) Sweet!

T. James

I like to travel with my mom. 

>>> CORRECT

That is beacuse I don\'t mind to use the money during traveling. 

>>> That is because I don\'t mind to use the money during traveling. 

I have experienced taveling with my mom before. We haven\'t any argue and we got along well. 

>>> I have experienced traveling with my mom before. We haven\'t any arguments, and we got along well. 

But, in another side, I couldn\'t play some extrem activities together.

>>> But, in another side, I couldn\'t play some extreme activities together.

 If doing alone, I nomally feel less excited. 

>>> If doing alone, I normally feel less excited. 

So, that point was a little bit sad point.

>>> So, that point was a little bit sad. 

 As a result, I prefer to travel with my mom.

>>> CORRECT

 


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