Do you like to travel with your mother? Why or why not?
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T. James
I like to travel with my mom.
>>> CORRECT
That is beacuse I don\'t mind to use the money during traveling.
>>> That is because I don\'t mind to use the money during traveling.
I have experienced taveling with my mom before. We haven\'t any argue and we got along well.
>>> I have experienced traveling with my mom before. We haven\'t any arguments, and we got along well.
But, in another side, I couldn\'t play some extrem activities together.
>>> But, in another side, I couldn\'t play some extreme activities together.
If doing alone, I nomally feel less excited.
>>> If doing alone, I normally feel less excited.
So, that point was a little bit sad point.
>>> So, that point was a little bit sad.
As a result, I prefer to travel with my mom.
>>> CORRECT
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