Do you like to try local foods when you go somewhere? Have you ever had something really delicious?

2023-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to try local foods. That is enjoy of a trip. When I went to Bali, Indonesia for honeymoon, I ate local foods. Fortunately, Indonesian foods was suited for me.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your thoughts about local foods.
Enjoy your day! 
~Kelly^^
I like to try local foods.
>> Correct
That is enjoy of a trip.
>> That makes traveling fun.
When I went to Bali, Indonesia for honeymoon, I ate local foods.
>> When I went to Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon, I ate local foods.
Fortunately, Indonesian foods was suited for me.
>> Fortunately, Indonesian foods were suited for me.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·