Do you like to try local foods when you go somewhere? Have you ever had something really delicious?

2023-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I prefer eating local foods when I go somewhere. Food is a big part of culture and I want to try it as well. But it has been globalized for now, so it is seldom to try something new. When I went to Brazil, Asado(Brazilian barbecue) was famous and I tried it. It was delicious but expectable. And Empanada(latin american pie) was delicious but expectable in Chile, too. Anyway, foods that I tried were expectable but if it was exotic to me, then I couldn\'t eaten these delicious.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ian!
I really appreciate your effort in doing your homework. I feel the same way, like what you\'ve mentioned, about trying local food. There are foods that you can expect to be delicious because you are familiar with the ingredients used. I also feel scared and hesitant in trying those that I\'m not familiar with.
- T. Caitlyn
I prefer eating local foods when I go somewhere.
>> CORRECT
Food is a big part of culture and I want to try it as well.
>> Food is a big part of the culture and I want to try it as well.
But it has been globalized for now, so it is seldom to try something new.
>> But is it globalized nowadays so it is seldom that we try something new.
When I went to Brazil, Asado(Brazilian barbecue) was famous and I tried it.
>> When I went to Brazil, I tried a famous Brazilian barbecue called Asado.
It was delicious but expectable. 
>> It was delicious but I expected it.
And Empanada( latin american pie) was delicious but expectable in Chile, too.
>> And when I went to Chile, I tried Empanada, a Latin American pie, and it was delicious but I also expected it.
Anyway, foods that I tried were expectable but if it was exotic to me, then I couldn\'t eaten these delicious.
>> Anyway, I usually try food that I expected to be delicious but when the food is exotic to me, I wouldn\'t try it.

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