Do you like to try local foods when you go somewhere? Have you ever had something really delicious?
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I felt hungry after reading your composition, Sir [이름]. ^^
I suddenly want to eat Ramyeon and Kimchi. ^^
I hope that you are going to eat a delicious meal for dinner, ^^
As you know, I love eating. I like to taste the different local dishes of various countries around the globe.
Thank you for your composition.
Teacher Nina
When I travel to foreign countries, I’m willing to try local foods.
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However, I am not an extreme explorer who even tries bizarre local foods such as fried insects, steamed snakes, or cooked animals.
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When I travel with my colleagues or friends, it bugs me to see them who for the most part will not step out of their food comfort zone.
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They often head to Korean, Chinese or Japanese restaurants for their meals.
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They will often bring Kimchi, dried sea weeds, Chile sauce, and Ramyon.
>> They often bring Kimchi, dried sea weeds, Chile sauce and Ramyeon.
They replicate their culinary habits from their home country.
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Personally I like to make my diet the majority of the time as local as possible.
>> Personally, I like to make my diet like the Korean recipe, majority of the time as local as possible.
One of the best things about travelling is to experience and taste a wide variety of food and local cuisines.
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Saying that, on extended trips I have broken up my diet with occasional visits to different restaurants too because sometimes I do just feel like something different.
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Most of the time I tend to flit between street food and smaller family owned cafes.
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