Do you like to try local foods when you go somewhere? Have you ever had something really delicious?

2015-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

When I travel to foreign countries, I’m willing to try local foods. However, I am not an extreme explorer who even tries bizarre local foods such as fried insects, steamed snakes, or cooked animals. When I travel with my colleagues or friends, it bugs me to see them who for the most part will not step out of their food comfort zone. They often head to Korean, Chinese or Japanese restaurants for their meals. They will often bring Kimchi, dried sea weeds, Chile sauce, and Ramyon. They replicate their culinary habits from their home country. Personally I like to make my diet the majority of the time as local as possible. One of the best things about travelling is to experience and taste a wide variety of food and local cuisines. Saying that, on extended trips I have broken up my diet with occasional visits to different restaurants too because sometimes I do just feel like something different. Most of the time I tend to flit between street food and smaller family owned cafes.

강사 첨삭

I felt hungry after reading your composition, Sir [이름]. ^^

I suddenly want to eat Ramyeon and Kimchi. ^^

I hope that you are going to eat a delicious meal for dinner, ^^

As you know, I love eating. I like to taste the different local dishes of various countries around the globe.

Thank you for your composition.

Teacher Nina


When I travel to foreign countries, I’m willing to try local foods.

>> correct

However, I am not an extreme explorer who even tries bizarre local foods such as fried insects, steamed snakes, or cooked animals.

>> correct

When I travel with my colleagues or friends, it bugs me to see them who for the most part will not step out of their food comfort zone.

>> correct

They often head to Korean, Chinese or Japanese restaurants for their meals.

>> correct

They will often bring Kimchi, dried sea weeds, Chile sauce, and Ramyon.

>> They often bring Kimchi, dried sea weeds, Chile sauce and Ramyeon.

They replicate their culinary habits from their home country.

>> correct

Personally I like to make my diet the majority of the time as local as possible.

>> Personally, I like to make my diet like the Korean recipe, majority of the time as local as possible.

One of the best things about travelling is to experience and taste a wide variety of food and local cuisines.

>> correct

Saying that, on extended trips I have broken up my diet with occasional visits to different restaurants too because sometimes I do just feel like something different.

>> correct

Most of the time I tend to flit between street food and smaller family owned cafes.

>> correct

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