Do you like to use things that have a fruit smell? What's the most delicious fruit in your opinion?
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I do not like to use things that have a fruit smell. Actually I do not like any types of artificial smells. I like being natural. A smell from real fruits, trees, and flowers are fine, however perfume or things that have been made to smell some artificial scents are not my taste. Some people use air freshener in their cars or at homes. Perfumes are also widely by used by women. However, they are even harmful to our health. The chemicals in air fresheners are really nothing more than pleasant-smelling air pollutants. Air fresheners release organic chemicals that are toxic in certain amounts. The levels of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) produced by an air freshener in a small room can easily produce VOC levels that exceed the standards that has been set to protect people. Speaking of fruits, I like pears, peaches and watermelons. They are sweet. I do not like apples or grapes, which have the taste of sourness. Since I like sweets, I am a bit worry about my blood sugar level.
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Hello there Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday!
How are you doing today?
Thanks for giving me the chance to know you better and for your opininos about this matter.
There are a lot of people who spend some money for air fresheners.
Like what you mentioned below, there are some organic chemicals that it releases. I hope that those people will be educated about this. I learned something from your composition.
Thanks. Anyway, just drink a lot of water whenever you eat a lot of sweets.
It\'s nice that you are really conscious about your health. Talk to you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
I do not like to use things that have a fruit smell.
>> I do not like to use things that have a fruity smell.
Actually I do not like any types of artificial smells.
>> correct
I like being natural.
>> correct
A smell from real fruits, trees, and flowers are fine, however perfume or things that have been made to smell some artificial scents are not my taste.
>> correct
>> OR: A smell from real fruits, trees, and flowers are fine, however perfume or things that have been made to artificial scents are not my taste.
Some people use air freshener in their cars or at homes.
>> correct
Perfumes are also widely by used by women.
>> Perfumes are also widely used by women.
However, they are even harmful to our health.
>> correct
>> OR: However, they are harmful to our health.
The chemicals in air fresheners are really nothing more than pleasant-smelling air pollutants.
>> The chemicals in air fresheners are really nothing more than the pleasant-smelling air pollutants.
Air fresheners release organic chemicals that are toxic in certain amounts.
>> correct
The levels of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) produced by an air freshener in a small room can easily produce VOC levels that exceed the standards that has been set to protect people.
>> correct
>> OR: The levels of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) produced by an air freshener in a small room can easily produce levels that exceed the standards that has been set to protect people.
Speaking of fruits, I like pears, peaches and watermelons.
>> correct
They are sweet.
>> correct
I do not like apples or grapes, which have the taste of sourness.
>> correct
>> OR: I don\'t like apples or grapes which have a sour taste.
Since I like sweets, I am a bit worry about my blood sugar level.
>> Since I like sweets, I am a bit worried about my blood sugar level.
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