Do you like walking barefoot?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m soso like walking on the barfoot.
Beacause I don\'t like walking barfoot on the sand.
And I like walking barfoot in my house.
And I don\'t like walking barfoot in the bathroom.
And I like walking barfoot on my bed.
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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I\'m soso like walking on the barfoot.
>> It\'s just fine for me when walking barefoot.
Beacause I don\'t like walking barfoot on the sand.
Beacause I don\'t like walking barfoot on the sand.
>> That\'s because I don\'t like walking barefoot on the sand.
And I like walking barfoot in my house.
>> I like walking barefoot in my house.
OR >> I like walking barefoot at home.
And I don\'t like walking barfoot in the bathroom.
>> But I don\'t like walking barefoot in the bathroom.
And I like walking barfoot on my bed.
>> I like walking barefoot when I am on my bed.
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