Do you like watching Korean dramas?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like watching korea drama.
But actually I watching from time to time.
Because All most Korea Drama story is similiar to me.
For example, girl main character of the drama is always poor situation.
Eventually at the end, always she become happy with man ( future husband)
This story is boring!
So, I like the genre is Detective.
It is very exciting, and story is nor predicitied.
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~Teacher Sheila
>>I like watching Korean dramas.
But actually I watching from time to time.
>>But actually, I watch from time to time.
Because All most Korea Drama story is similiar to me.
>>Because almost Korean dramas\' story is similar to me.
For example, girl main character of the drama is always poor situation.
>>For example, the main character of the drama is always in a poor situation.
Eventually at the end, always she become happy with man ( future husband)
>>Eventually at the end, she becomes happy with a man which is her future husband.
This story is boring!
>>CORRECT
So, I like the genre is Detective.
>>So, I like the genre about detectives.
It is very exciting, and story is nor predicitied.
>>It is very exciting and the story cannot be predicted.
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