Do you like watching other people dancing? Why do people like to dance?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, When I go to milonga(milonga is place to dance thango) always watch other people.
I think it is study.
And I think who is good or bad style.
Then I try to good style.
The reasons for dancing will be different for different people.
Dance to me is healing. We talk Milonga have all emotions.
Someday was happy and otherday was sad, angry...so etc.(I\'m sorry for my lack of words ㅠㅠ)
Of course we want to happy but it doesn\'t go our way.
I think that is charm of dance.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework before you go on a trip. When writing, be careful with your punctuation marks and capital letters. ^_^
Yes, When I go to milonga(milonga is place to dance thango) always watch other people.
>>> Yes, When I go to Milonga, (Milonga is place to dance Tango) I always watch other people dancing.
I think it is study.
>>>I think it is a study.
And I think who is good or bad style.
>>>I also think who has good or bad style.
Then I try to good style.
>>>Then, I try to dance the good styles.
The reasons for dancing will be different for different people.
>>>The reasons for dancing will be different from other people.
Dance to me is healing.
>>>Dan is a healing for me.
We talk Milonga have all emotions.
>>>We talk with all emotions in Milonga.
Someday was happy and otherday was sad, angry...so etc.
>>>Some days were happy and other days were sad angry and other feelings.
Of course we want to happy but it doesn\'t go our way.
>>>Of course we want to be happy but sometimes, it doesn\'t go our way.
I think that is charm of dance.
>>>I think that the charm of dances.
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