Do you like Winter?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like Winter.
My favorite weather is Fall but I like winter too.
I have been waiting for winter to come; One of My hobbies is snowboarding.
This winter, I will go snowboarding with my boyfriend.(I met him first snowboarding. >ㅅ< )
Now, there are not another reason as well.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
What a sweet story!^^kkk
I think that it\'s romantic. I hope you\'ll be forever with your boyfriend so that every Winter is happiness for you.
I also want Winter and build a snow man.hahaha
Of course I have to go to a place with snow first because we don\'t have Winter here in my country.kkk
I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow!^^
Teacher Reina *,*
Yes, I like Winter.
>>> correct!^^
My favorite weather is Fall but I like winter too.
>>> My favorite season is Fall but I like Winter too.
I have been waiting for winter to come; One of My hobbies is snowboarding.
>>> correct!^^
This winter, I will go snowboarding with my boyfriend.
>>> correct!^^
(I met him first snowboarding. >ㅅ< )
>>> I first met him when I was snowboarding.
Now, there are not another reason as well.
>>> Now, there are other reasons as well.
( I hope this is what you mean by this sentence...)
What a sweet story!^^kkk
I think that it\'s romantic. I hope you\'ll be forever with your boyfriend so that every Winter is happiness for you.
I also want Winter and build a snow man.hahaha
Of course I have to go to a place with snow first because we don\'t have Winter here in my country.kkk
I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow!^^
Teacher Reina *,*
Yes, I like Winter.
>>> correct!^^
My favorite weather is Fall but I like winter too.
>>> My favorite season is Fall but I like Winter too.
I have been waiting for winter to come; One of My hobbies is snowboarding.
>>> correct!^^
This winter, I will go snowboarding with my boyfriend.
>>> correct!^^
(I met him first snowboarding. >ㅅ< )
>>> I first met him when I was snowboarding.
Now, there are not another reason as well.
>>> Now, there are other reasons as well.
( I hope this is what you mean by this sentence...)
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