Do you like winter? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like winter when I was young
When white snow comes down I had snowball fight with frends
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
Great job in making your homework.
You did well in making your sentences. I only had minor corrections. ^^
I hope that you will have a good night!
Take care and see you tomorrow! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
When white snow comes down I had snowball fight with frends
When white snow comes down I had snowball fight with frends
>> When white snow falls down, I had a snowball fight with friends.
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