Do you like working with the public?
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I would first need to elaborate on what you mean by the public. If you indicate to the people that I enjoy a collaborative atmosphere working in a group. I believe there could be a lot of information and know-how to learn from other team members. Cooperating with others allows me to equip myself with a more creative idea to tackle the problem. However, working with a broad audience would be a different story if you mean it. In my previous experience, I mostly worked at a private enterprise with a specific client base. If the client base is not segmented, there could be a challenge in pinpointing the demand. I would need to go through significant categorization and segmentation procedures to cater to every request by streamlining the resources. Nevertheless, with the previous opportunities segmentizing different sectors and APAC markets, there would be skill-sets I could transfer back.
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Thanks for this Aciel!
I would first need to elaborate on what you mean by the public.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I would first need an elaboration on what you mean by the public.
If you indicate to the people that I enjoy a collaborative atmosphere working in a group.
>>> OR: If it is referring to the people that I enjoy a collaborative atmosphere working with in a group.
I believe there could be a lot of information and know-how to learn from other team members.
>>> correct
Cooperating with others allows me to equip myself with a more creative idea to tackle the problem.
>>> correct
However, working with a broad audience would be a different story if you mean it.
>>> correct
>>> OR: However, working with a broad audience would be a different story if that\'s what you mean.
>>> OR: However, working with a broad audience would be a different story if that\'s what you are referring to.
In my previous experience, I mostly worked at a private enterprise with a specific client base.
>>> correct
If the client base is not segmented, there could be a challenge in pinpointing the demand.
>>> correct
I would need to go through significant categorization and segmentation procedures to cater to every request by streamlining the resources.
>>> correct
Nevertheless, with the previous opportunities segmentizing different sectors and APAC markets, there would be skill-sets I could transfer back.
>>> Nevertheless, with the previous opportunities segmenting different sectors and APAC markets, there would be skill-sets I could transfer back.
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