Do you like your bedroom style?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like my bedroom style very much. It is a cozy little place where I relax. I love spending time there. When I step inside to my room, there is a super single sized bed for me and a big world map on the wall above my bed so I can look where counties are before I sleep. l can lie down anytime I’m tired in my lovely room. I have a window that lets in the sunshine with blue curtain. I have many kinds of books such as novels, comic books, nonfictions neatly arranged on a shelf in my room. My room is kind of little so l can feel more cozy and it makes me always happy.
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Great answers on your homework.
T. DON
I like my bedroom style very much. It is a cozy little place where I
relax. I love spending time there. When I step inside to my room, there
is a super single sized bed for me and a big world map on the wall above
my bed so I can look where counties are before I sleep. l can lie down
anytime I’m tired in my lovely room. I have a window that lets in the
sunshine with blue curtain. I have many kinds of books such as novels,
comic books, nonfictions neatly arranged on a shelf in my room. My room
is kind of little so l can feel more cozy and it makes me always happy.
>> I like my bedroom style very much. It is a cozy little place where I
can relax. I love spending time there. When I step inside my room, there
is a super single sized bed for me and a big world map on the wall above
my bed so I can look where counties are before I sleep. l can lie down
anytime I’m tired in my lovely room. I have a window that lets the
sunshine in with a blue curtain. I have many kinds of books such as novels,
comic books, non fictions that are neatly arranged on a shelf in my room. My room
is kind of little so l can feel more cozy and it makes me always feel happy.
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