Do you like your country? Write two things that you like about South Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes I like my country.
I like many developed cities and many mountains in my country.
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Do you like your country? Write two things that you like about South Korea.
Yes I like my country.
>> Yes, I like my country.
>> OR: I love my country.
I like many developed cities and many mountains in my country.
>> CORRECT~~
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