Do you like your hometown? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like my hometown in which I currently live because it is very convenient in terms of transportation. It has lots of public bus station and subway station. Also, there are cultural facilities and it is close to the city center. Thus, I like living in this town.
강사 첨삭
I like my hometown in which I currently live because it is very convenient in terms of transportation.
>> I like my hometown in which I currently live in. because, it is very convenient in terms of transportation.
It has lots of public bus station and subway station. Also, there are cultural facilities and it is close to the city center.
>> It has lots of public bus station and subway stations. Also, there are cultural facilities and it is close to the city center.
Thus, I like living in this town.
>> CORRECT
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