Do you like your neighborhood? What do you like about it?

2020-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was young, I lived in a house and I was close to my neighbors. We ate together and knew who lived in which house. As cities developed and people lived in apartments, it became difficult to communicate with neighbors. Also, people move frequently and live without knowing who their neighbors are. The more people live in the city, they are very busy. The city has a lot of change. The place where I live is convenient for transportation and there is a large mart, but the neighbors do not know. Sometimes it passes by as much as greeting when we meet. The city is not as affectionate as the countryside

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Your neighborhood is completely relatable with anyone in the city. I guess it is the result of modernity. I\'m not sure if it will be the same in the future. But, as long as we feel safe in our neighborhood, I think it is good enough. Have a good day!~~T.Dee

When I was young, I lived in a house and I was close to my neighbors.
>>CORRECT!
We ate together and knew who lived in which house.
>>We ate together and we knew who lived in which house.
As cities developed and people lived in apartments, it became difficult to communicate with neighbors.
>>CORRECT!
Also, people move frequently and live without knowing who their neighbors are.
>>CORRECT!
The more people live in the city, they are very busy. 
>>The more people live in the city, the busier it gets.
The city has a lot of change.
>>The city has a lot of changes.
The place where I live is convenient for transportation and there is a large mart, but the neighbors do not know. 
>>The place where I live is convenient for transportation and there is a large mart, but I don\'t know many of my neighbors. 
Sometimes it passes by as much as greeting when we meet.
>>Sometimes, give a short greeting when we meet.
The city is not as affectionate as the countryside.
>>CORRECT!

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