Do you love your neighborhood? Please explain your answer
학생이 쓴 원문
There are several reasons why I love my neighborhood.
1st, I have some good friends, so I can see them anytime.
2nd, There are many amenities near my house.
kind of supermarkets, government office, movie theather, public transportation.
sports center and hospitals
3rd, It\'s nice to take a walk in the park near my house.
강사 첨삭
I totally agree with you, Jullia! We feel at home when we are in our neighborhood. May you maintain the harmony in your place.
-Faith-
There are several reasons why I love my neighborhood.>> CORRECT
1st, I have some good friends, so I can see them anytime.
1st, I have some good friends, so I can see them anytime.
>> First, I have some good friends here, so I can see them anytime.
2nd, There are many amenities near my house.
2nd, There are many amenities near my house.
>> Second, there are many amenities near my house.
kind of supermarkets, government office, movie theather, public transportation. sports center and hospitals
kind of supermarkets, government office, movie theather, public transportation. sports center and hospitals
>> There are supermarkets, government offices, movie theaters, public transportation, sports centers, and hospitals.
3rd, It\'s nice to take a walk in the park near my house.
3rd, It\'s nice to take a walk in the park near my house.
>> Third, it\'s nice to take a walk in the park near my house.
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