Do you love yourself? Is it important to love yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I love myself.
Self-esteem is important for living.
It\"s influenced by parents in childhood and by people in a social environment.
It has a positive power .
So, it helps to achieve a goal and to get through difficulties.
It makes people encouraging.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
You would be able to see the differences in the way you write each time.
Learn from your mistakes and become better in expressing yourself.
Let\'s keep this going.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Of course, I love myself.
>> Correct
Self-esteem is important for living.
Self-esteem is important for living.
>> Correct
It\"s influenced by parents in childhood and by people in a social environment.
It\"s influenced by parents in childhood and by people in a social environment.
>> It\'s influenced by parents during childhood and by other people in a social environment.
It has a positive power .
It has a positive power .
>> It has a positive impact.
So, it helps to achieve a goal and to get through difficulties.
So, it helps to achieve a goal and to get through difficulties.
>> Correct
It makes people encouraging.
It makes people encouraging.
>> It makes people feel motivated.
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