Do you mind sharing your problems with your friends?

2021-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to share good things to talk. I don’t like to share Bad things with my friends. But I have four friends to talk about my problems! I can tell everything to them.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Su [이름]! It\'s really nice to have good and trusted friends. You can talk to them regardless of your situation. Have a great day. Thank you for doing your homework!
Teacher Aki ~
I like to share good things to talk. 
>>> I like sharing good things with my friends.
I don’t like to share Bad things with my friends. 
>>>CORRECT!
OR >> I don\'t like sharing bad things to my friends
But I have four friends to talk about my problems! 
 >>> But I have four friends that I can talk to about my problems.
I can tell everything to them.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I don\'t hide anything from them.

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