Do you need a bucket list?
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Honestly, I am afraid not. Having a bucket list is not my cup of tea. I mean, when I have a that, I would be not lazy to accomplish it so it would be a burden mentally. Of course I want to do that I indeed complete like living in a hot weather nation for one year, but it is not my bucket list.
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Hello [이름]!
A bucket list needs a lot of planning, time, money and effort to fulfill. To have one needs dedication and perseverance. In your case you want to have short term goals and that is absolutely less pressure and stress.
If a bucket plan makes one happy, so be it. If it doesn\'t, perhaps you have other priorities to pay attention to and that\'s fine.
Thanks for your answer as always!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Having a bucket list is not my cup of tea.
>> Correct!
I mean, when I have a that, I would be not lazy to accomplish it so it would be a burden mentally.
>> I mean when I don\'t have that, I would not be lazy to accomplish it so it wouldn\'t be a burden mentally.
Of course I want to do that I indeed complete like living in a hot weather nation for one year, but it is not my bucket list.
>> Of course I want to indeed complete one thing like living in a hot weather nation for one year, but it is not my bucket list.
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