Do you often make impulse purchases, or do you only buy what you plan to buy?

2020-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Actually, I tend to buy impulse. Even if I made a plan, I made an impulse purchase and never regretted it. I love clothes bag shoes. When I make an impulse purchase, I buy it when I feel that very cheap. They are the object of my impulse purchase. Items purchased on impulse are given to others if I do not use them. Anything I don\'t use is taken to the salon. The beauty salon is a place where a lot of people gather and is used by people who need things. The impulse buying that I have made is beneficial for others to use.

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Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for you completing your homework today. Check the corrections below. Have a good day!~~T.Dee

Actually, I tend to buy impulse.
>>Actually, I tend to buy by impulse.
Even if I made a plan, I made an impulse purchase and never regretted it.
>>Even if I made a plan but I made an impulse purchase, I never regretted it.
I love clothes bag shoes.
>>I love clothes, bag, and shoes.
When I make an impulse purchase, I buy it when I feel that very cheap.
>>When I make an impulse purchase, I buy it when I feel that it is very cheap.
They are the object of my impulse purchase.
>>They are the objects of my impulse purchase.
Items purchased on impulse are given to others if I do not use them.
>>The items I\'ve purchased on impulse are given to others if I do not use them.
Anything I don\'t use is taken to the salon.
>>Anything I don\'t use is given to the salon.
The beauty salon is a place where a lot of people gather and is used by people who need things.
>>CORRECT!
The impulse buying that I have made is beneficial for others to use.
>>CORRECT!

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