Do you personally believe in \'ghosts\'? Why or why not? Kindly answer in 3-5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t believe in the existence of ghosts.
Some people think that it is truth, but it is just what human don\'t understand yet.
After broad our knowledge further, then we must find the the belief is absurd.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, SUE!
Happy Friday!
We won\'t study tonight, but I hope you\'re doing alright. Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
You did a very good job. However, I\'ve made some modifications.
We can talk about this in class if you want to.
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I don\'t believe in the existence of ghosts.
>>> CORRECT
Some people think that it is truth, but it is just what human don\'t understand yet.
Some people think that it is truth, but it is just what human don\'t understand yet.
>>> Some people think that it is truth, but it is something that humans can\'t really explain.
After broad our knowledge further, then we must find the the belief is absurd.
After broad our knowledge further, then we must find the the belief is absurd.
>>> Once we\'ve broaden our horizon, we\'ll realize that it is absurd.
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