Do you personally believe that taking care of plants or pets can serve as a therapy? Why or why not?
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I think taking care of plants or cats can serve as a therapy.
Because they are cute or refreshing so people will be healed and also you can tell it to people or post it on the internet.
And also it animals are active so people will be too.
And plants have a good smell so I think they can... :-)
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Do you personally believe that taking care of plants or pets can serve as a therapy? Why or why not?
I think taking care of plants or cats can serve as a therapy.
>>> CORRECT
Because they are cute or refreshing so people will be healed and also you can tell it to people or post it on the internet.
>>> Because they are cute and refreshing so people can heal from their loneliness and also it\'s what people say in their posts in the internet.
And also it animals are active so people will be too.
>>> In addition, when these animals are active then the owner can\'t help but be active and happy too.
And plants have a good smell so I think they can.
>>> Moreover, plants have good smell sometimes aromatic smell that naturally relaxes us when inhaled, so I think it help us similar to a therapy.
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