Do you play any sports?
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When I was young, I used to play soccer.
>>> CORRECT
I liked the sports which is used a ball.
>>> I liked the sports which use a ball.
However, I don\'t have enough time and physical strength.
>>> CORRECT
These days, I try to work out in the jym and to manage my healthy.
>>> These days, I try to work out in the gym and to manage my health.
By the way, nowadays, E-sports is also famous sports in Korea and some countries.
>>> By the way, nowadays, E-sports are also famous sports in Korea and some countries.
I am interested in some games which is competited or shooting through guns. I wish to join the contest. hahahahaha
>>> I am interested in some games which is competitive or shooting through guns. I wish to join the contest. Bahahaha.
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