Do you prefer a budget or first class hotel? Why?

2014-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I personally prefer a budget hotel to a five star hotel. There is no doubt that the first class hotel is where we all like to stay and dream of. However, considering the value of the money you’ll spend for, it’s not bad to stay in a less expensive hotel. Who doesn’t like a luxurious hotel that has a suite room, a beautiful ocean view, the variety of food, and premium service? We all dream of spending our vacation in such a luxury hotel. The problem is whether you can afford them. Unless it isn’t too bad to ruin my golden vacation, I will choose a less premium hotel and spend the savings for the other trip. I would rather take a vacation twice rather than spend all of the money for just one trip. My wife is totally opposite. The first thing she considers when taking an overseas trip is a hotel. She insists that staying in a good hotel is something we cannot compromise with any other things. Above all, she is fond of buffet-style breakfast and crazy about the cuisine of all countries

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]!

We finished another week and we are going to celebrate Christmas next week. Hihihihi.

Thanks for your time and for a perfect essay today.

You are right, it is better to stay in a budget house and save for the next trip wherein you can enjoy a lot of things.

I am grateful that you also shared about your wife\'s interest. Have a great day.
Teacher Nina


I personally prefer a budget hotel to a five star hotel.
>> CORRECT

There is no doubt that the first class hotel is where we all like to stay and dream of.

>> CORRECT

>> There is no doubt that the first class hotel is where we all like to spend our vacation and dream of.

However, considering the value of the money you’ll spend for, it’s not bad to stay in a less expensive hotel.

>> CORRECT

Who doesn’t like a luxurious hotel that has a suite room, a beautiful ocean view, the variety of food, and premium service?

>> CORRECT

We all dream of spending our vacation in such a luxury hotel.

>> CORRECT

The problem is whether you can afford them.

>> CORRECT

Unless it isn’t too bad to ruin my golden vacation, I will choose a less premium hotel and spend the savings for the other trip.

>> CORRECT

I would rather take a vacation twice rather than spend all of the money for just one trip.

>> CORRECT

My wife is totally opposite.

>> CORRECT

The first thing she considers when taking an overseas trip is a hotel.

>> CORRECT

She insists that staying in a good hotel is something we cannot compromise with any other things.

>> CORRECT

Above all, she is fond of buffet-style breakfast and crazy about the cuisine of all countries

>> CORRECT

>> Most of all, she is fond of buffet-style breakfast and crazy about other cuisines all over the globe.

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