Do you prefer a planned vacation or a spontaneous one? Why?
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Do you prefer a planned vacation or a spontaneous one? Why?
: I prefer a planned vacation. I used to be a spontaneous person. I visited Italy with any plans missed many famous places and restaurants. I became a planed person. I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks before.
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Hi!
Thank you for sharing your answer with me.
It was interesting to learn that your travel experiences have influenced a change in your personality.
I think it was a positive change! ^^
It was interesting to learn that your travel experiences have influenced a change in your personality.
I think it was a positive change! ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I prefer a planned vacation.
>> CORRECT.
I used to be a spontaneous person.
>> CORRECT.
I visited Italy with any plans missed many famous places and restaurants.
>> I visited Italy without any plans and missed many famous places and restaurants.
I became a planed person.
>> Since then, I’ve become more organized.
>> Or: Since then, I’ve become a planner.
I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks before.
>> Now, I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks in advance.
>> Or: Now, I plan my itinerary at least 3 weeks before my trip.
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