Do you prefer active or relaxing holidays? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
i prefer active holidays because literally holiday is doing rest day i think.
in my case, i wanted to rest but not in my home, other place like air bnb which looks so cool and nice place.
and at night barbecue for dinner with little alcohol.
this is my original plan haha i prefer like this.
but in real i always changed plan to be forced, i mean my plan was broken always.
even 3 weeks ago me and my friends were going to other city Kyongju.
early in the trip my plan wasn\'t broken yet and after lunch we visited amusement park and changed haha.
we got on rides too much so we feel to get tired
our plan is healing but changed active suddenly.
as a result. i prefer the relaxing but sometimes it can be changed
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That was a funny story. I can imagine your plans not being followed thoroughly because you and your friends suddenly decided to do something else. Anyway, you are still Mr. [Name], so your friends probably still trust your ways:)
-Rachel
I prefer active holidays because literally holiday is doing rest day I think.
>> correct
>> I prefer active holidays because for me holiday literally means resting.
In my case, I wanted to rest but not in my home, other place like air bnb which looks so cool and nice place.
and at night barbecue for dinner with little alcohol.
In my case, I wanted to rest but not in my home, other place like air bnb which looks so cool and nice place.
and at night barbecue for dinner with little alcohol.
>> In my case, I want to rest not at home but in other places like Air BnB which is cool and nice, and at night have barbecue for dinner with some alcohol.
this is my original plan haha i prefer like this.
this is my original plan haha i prefer like this.
>> This is my original plan and I prefer it this way.
but in real i always changed plan to be forced, i mean my plan was broken always.
but in real i always changed plan to be forced, i mean my plan was broken always.
>> But in reality, I always change my plans because sometimes the circumstances cause me to do so.
Even 3 weeks ago me and my friends were going to other city called Kyongju.
Even 3 weeks ago me and my friends were going to other city called Kyongju.
>> correct
Early in the trip my plan wasn\'t broken yet and after lunch we visited amusement park and changed haha.
Early in the trip my plan wasn\'t broken yet and after lunch we visited amusement park and changed haha.
>> correct
>> Early in the trip, my plan was being followed smoothly but after lunch we visited an amusement park and from thereon, everything changed.
We got on rides too much so we feel to get tired
We got on rides too much so we feel to get tired
>> correct
our plan is healing but changed active suddenly.
>> Our plan was to have healing, but it changed to having an active holiday.
as a result. i prefer the relaxing but sometimes it can be changed
as a result. i prefer the relaxing but sometimes it can be changed
>> As a result, I prefer to relax but sometimes it can be changed.
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