Do you prefer being along or being with other people?

Many at time, I think I am a person who does not feel loneliness. In addition, though I am not sensitive at the most situations, it is better to do alone because there was not any cause of disturbances or discords. It seems that I am really individualistic person. However, nowadays, there is a creak on my belief. I start having a question whether this independent life, which is so clam and peaceful, but also too silent, is truly fine. I also like travelling alone, but when I recall these memories, there are lots of emptiness comparing with the others that I went with my family or friends. Moreover, I realize that reminiscences which I had done with others would be great sources to re-arouse various emotions when we remind them together. So, few months ago, I gave up a chance to go to travel on my own, because it looked like a little meaninglessness. Nonetheless, I still prefer being alone. I might need more time to change my stance.

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Do you prefer being alone or being with other people?

Many at time, I think I am a person who does not feel loneliness.

>>For such a long time, I think I am a person who does not feel any loneliness.

In addition, though I am not sensitive at the most situations, it is better to do alone because there was not any cause of disturbances or discords.

>>In addition, though I am not sensitive in most situations, it is better to be alone because there will no be no disturbances or discords.

It seems that I am really individualistic person.

>>It seems that I am really an individualistic person.

However, nowadays, there is a creak on my belief.

>>However, nowadays, there is a crack on my beliefs.

I start having a question whether this independent life, which is so clam and peaceful, but also too silent, is truly fine.

>>I started having a question whether this so called independent life, which is so calm and peaceful, but also too silent, is truly fine.

I also like travelling alone, but when I recall these memories, there are lots of emptiness comparing with the others that I went with my family or friends.

>>I also like travelling alone, but when I recall some memories, there are lots of emptiness comparing with the others wherein I traveled with my family or friends.

Moreover, I realize that reminiscences which I had done with others would be great sources to re-arouse various emotions when we remind them together.

>>Moreover, I realize that if I reminisce on the trips I did with others, it can be a great source for me to recreate past emotions, especially if we remind others about them.

So, few months ago, I gave up a chance to go to travel on my own, because it looked like a little meaninglessness.

>>So, a few months ago, I gave up a chance to travel on my own, because it looked meaninglessness.

or>>So, several months ago, I canceled an opportunity to go on a trip on my own, because it seemed so meaninglessness.

Nonetheless, I still prefer being alone. I might need more time to change my stance.

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or>>However, I still like my own company. I may require more time to change overnight.