Do you prefer big celebrations or small gatherings for special occasions? Why?
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Hahahaha, of course, it depends on the situations. When I have to gather my family, I prefer small gatherings with only my family members because I want to talk with them [이름]ce I didn\'t meet them. However, for special occasions, I like big celebrations with my relative or friends. I love saying \"The more the merrier\". It\'s out of the blue... Unfortunately, I couldn\'t go to a Salsa dance due to the rain. I really miss Guatemala girl. :(
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Hahahaha, of course, it depends on the situations.
>> CORRECT!When I have to gather my family, I prefer small gatherings with only my family members because I want to talk with them [이름]ce I didn\'t meet them.
>> When I have to gather together with my family, I prefer small gatherings with only my family members because I want to talk with them [이름]ce I didn\'t meet them.
However, for special occasions, I like big celebrations with my relative or friends.
>> CORRECT!However, for special occasions, I like big celebrations with my relative or friends.
I love saying \"The more the merrier\".
>> CORRECT!It\'s out of the blue.
>> CORRECT!Unfortunately, I couldn\'t go to a Salsa dance due to the rain.
>> Unfortunately, I couldn\'t go to the Salsa dance due to the rain.
I really miss Guatemala girl. :(
>> CORRECT!
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