Do you prefer buying branded or generic drugs? Do you think the effects are the same?

2019-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I have a tendency to choose branded drugs for the follow reasons. This is because they have no side effects by the several test. Many companies try to keep thieir brand value by suppling safer drugs than generic one. In addition, If the user has a symtom like side effects, they might deal with that problem like compensation. It makes them to keep produce process and expand their sales. In case of generic drugs, they were produced by copy off branded drug`s ingredients. I didn`t accurately know it, the chemical of drug will be reacted differently by the rate of the chemicals. So, I depend on branded drugs that made by several test. In consdering side effects, I prefer buying branded drugs.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. Well, you do have a point. It\'s better to stick with safer choices.

- T. Beth

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I have a tendency to choose branded drugs for the follow reasons.

>>> I have a tendency to choose branded drugs for the following reasons.  
This is because they have no side effects by the several test.

>>> This is because they have no side effects based on several tests.  

Many companies try to keep thieir brand value by suppling safer drugs than generic one.

>>>  Many companies try to keep their brand value by supplying safer drugs than generic ones. 

In addition, If the user has a symtom like side effects, they might deal with that problem like compensation.

>>> In addition, if the user develop symptoms of side effects, they might deal with that problem like giving compensations.  
It makes them to keep produce process and expand their sales.

>>>  It makes them to keep the production process and expand their sales.
In case of generic drugs, they were produced by copy off branded drug`s ingredients. 

>>>   In case of generic drugs, they were produced by imitating branded drugs. 
I didn`t accurately know it, the chemical of drug will be reacted differently by the rate of the chemicals.

>>>  I didn`t accurately know it, the chemical of drug will have different reactions depending on the rate of the chemicals. 

So, I depend on branded drugs that made by several test. 

>>> So, I depend on branded drugs that were made after several tests.  
In consdering side effects, I prefer buying branded drugs.

>>>  Considering side effects, I prefer buying branded drugs.

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