Do you prefer driving or riding public transportation?
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When I got a drive license, I prefered driving my car.
>>> When I got a driver’s license, I preferred driving my car.
However, as time goes by, I didn\'t want to drive.
>>> CORRECT
That is becuase I sick of drop my friends by their house.
>>> That is because I\'m sick of dropping my friends at their houses.
Whenever I bring my car at meeting up my friends, I did it.
>>> CORRECT
So, I changed my mind and I like to watch outside through a window in a bus.
>>> So, I changed my mind and I like to watch outside through a window on a bus.
It makes me peaceful.
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: It makes me feel more peaceful.
Also, I can save my money as parking fees and oil price.
>>> CORRECT
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