Do you prefer driving or riding public transportation?

2019-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 James

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When I got a drive license, I prefered driving my car. However, as time goes by, I didn\'t want to drive. That is becuase I sick of drop my friends by their house. Whenever I bring my car at meeting up my friends, I did it. So, I changed my mind and I like to watch outside through a window in a bus. It makes me peaceful. Also, I can save my money as parking fees and oil price.

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Hello [이름]

Thank you for your homework!!!

When I got a drive license, I prefered driving my car. 

>>> When I got a driver’s license, I preferred driving my car. 

However, as time goes by, I didn\'t want to drive. 

>>> CORRECT

That is becuase I sick of drop my friends by their house. 

>>> That is because I\'m sick of dropping my friends at their houses. 

Whenever I bring my car at meeting up my friends, I did it. 

>>> CORRECT

So, I changed my mind and I like to watch outside through a window in a bus.

>>> So, I changed my mind and I like to watch outside through a window on a bus. 

It makes me peaceful. 

>>> CORRECT

>>OR: It makes me feel more peaceful.

Also, I can save my money as parking fees and oil price.

>>> CORRECT

 


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