Do you prefer face to face learning or study at home learning?ᩚ
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I prefer study at home learning to face to face learning. First of all, I actually don’t like that someone is looking at me for teaching me very much. That makes me uneasy. However, when I study at home, I could more concentrate on my work and have enough time to think deeply. Secondly, I think Studying at home is make me comfortable and creative because I can more imagine for myself and read books as many as I can. In fact, I like studying with my mom at home more than any other teachers at the academy.
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Wednesday!
I prefer study at home learning to face to face learning. First of all, I
actually don’t like that someone is looking at me for teaching me very
much. That makes me uneasy. However, when I study at home, I could more
concentrate on my work and have enough time to think deeply. Secondly, I
think Studying at home is make me comfortable and creative because I
can more imagine for myself and read books as many as I can. In fact, I
like studying with my mom at home more than any other teachers at the
academy.
>> I prefer studying at home learning than face to face learning. First of all, I
actually don’t like that someone is looking at me when studying. That makes me uneasy. However, when I study at home, I could
concentrate more on my work and have enough time to think deeply. Secondly, I
think Studying at home makes me comfortable and creative because I
can imagine more for myself and read books as many as I can. In fact, I
like studying with my mom at home more than any other teachers at the
academy.
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