Do you prefer fresh ingredients prepared by a chef as you order or do you prefer pre-cooked food?

2019-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I prefer fresh ingredients prepared by a chef as my order. Nowadays, we always live fast. So it is common to eat pre-cooked food. Pre-cooked food is convenient and save time to cook and eat. But, I love to eat healthy and delious foods. I had an experience to visit a famous resturant. That resturant is very well-known in Itaewon, Korea. Even though, when I visited there, I saw jung ki, Song who is famous actor in Korea. That time I really enjoyed foods prepared by a chef. From that time I can\'t not forget the taste and my feeling. I hope I go to many well-known resturant and have experience to eat various foods.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kate!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day! ☺


I prefer fresh ingredients prepared by a chef as my order. 

>> CORRECT


Nowadays, we always live fast.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: We live in a fast-paced life nowadays.


So it is common to eat pre-cooked food. 

>> So, it is common to eat pre-cooked food. 


Pre-cooked food is convenient and save time to cook and eat.
But, I love to eat healthy and delious foods. 

>> Pre-cooked food is convenient, it saves cooking and eating time.


I had an experience to visit a famous resturant.

>> I had an experience dining in a famous restaurant.


That resturant is very well-known in Itaewon, Korea.

>> That restaurant is very well-known in Itaewon, Korea.


Even though, when I visited there, I saw jung ki,

>> I saw Joong Ki when we visited there.


Song who is famous actor in Korea. 

>> Song Joong Ki is a famous actor in Korea.


That time I really enjoyed foods prepared by a chef. 

>> I really enjoyed the meals that were prepared by a chef that time.


From that time I can\'t not forget the taste and my feeling. 

>> Since then, I couldn\'t forget the feeling and the good food.


I hope I go to many well-known resturant and have experience to eat various foods.

>> I hope to go to many well-known restaurants and experience eating various delicious foods.

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