Do you prefer fresh ingredients prepared by a chef as you order or do you prefer pre-cooked food?
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I prefer fresh ingredients prepared by a chef as my order.
>> CORRECT
Nowadays, we always live fast.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: We live in a fast-paced life nowadays.
So it is common to eat pre-cooked food.
>> So, it is common to eat pre-cooked food.
Pre-cooked food is convenient and save time to cook and eat.
But, I love to eat healthy and delious foods.
>> Pre-cooked food is convenient, it saves cooking and eating time.
I had an experience to visit a famous resturant.
>> I had an experience dining in a famous restaurant.
That resturant is very well-known in Itaewon, Korea.
>> That restaurant is very well-known in Itaewon, Korea.
Even though, when I visited there, I saw jung ki,
>> I saw Joong Ki when we visited there.
Song who is famous actor in Korea.
>> Song Joong Ki is a famous actor in Korea.
That time I really enjoyed foods prepared by a chef.
>> I really enjoyed the meals that were prepared by a chef that time.
From that time I can\'t not forget the taste and my feeling.
>> Since then, I couldn\'t forget the feeling and the good food.
I hope I go to many well-known resturant and have experience to eat various foods.
>> I hope to go to many well-known restaurants and experience eating various delicious foods.
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