Do you prefer guided tours or exploring on your own? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely, I prefer to explore on my own than guided tours because wherever I want to go. I don\'t have any options if I travel with guided tours. Just following a guider. On the other hand, as far as I\'m concerned, most parents prefer to guided tours than self-trip. They\'re not u[이름]g to find a direction, destination, and some places. In addition to that, speaking some languages. However, in Europe case, I want to do guided tours due to the discrimination. Even if it wouldn\'t protect it with only a guider, I can know how to deal with it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Absolutely, I prefer to explore on my own than guided tours because wherever I want to go.
>> Absolutely, I prefer to explore on my own than guided tours because I can go wherever I want to go.
I don\'t have any options if I travel with guided tours.
>> CORRECT!Just following a guider.
>> I just have to follow the tour guide.
On the other hand, as far as I\'m concerned, most parents prefer to guided tours than self-trip.
On the other hand, as far as I\'m concerned, most parents prefer to guided tours than self-trip.
>> On the other hand, as far as I\'m concerned, most parents prefer guided tours than self-trips.
They\'re not u[이름]g to find a direction, destination, and some places.
>> They\'re not used to finding a direction, destination, and some places.
In addition to that, speaking some languages.
>> In addition to that, speaking some languages are hard for them.
However, in Europe\'s case, I want to do guided tours due to discrimination.
>> CORRECT!Even if it wouldn\'t protect it with only a guider, I can know how to deal with it.
>> Even if I wouldn\'t be protected by the tour guide, I know how to deal with it.
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