Do you prefer holidays which include a lot of activities or more relaxing ones? Why?

2021-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I like activities holidays because it make me a very happy and it is surprise a present to me. And than I like a delicious food at holidays.

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I like activities holidays because it make me a very happy and it is surprise a present to me.

>> I like doing activities on holidays because it makes me very happy and it is a surprise present to me.

And than I like a delicious food at holidays.

>> And also, I like delicious food on holidays.

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