Do you prefer home-cooked meals or fast food?
학생이 쓴 원문
If the fast-food includes all if the food eating out, then I prefer to eat out when I have enough money. Actually, the cost for fast-food going higher and higher. If someone try to save his consumption, decreasing the number of eating out is effective. Like this, home-cooked meals usually cheaper than fast-food. For example, when I want to eat salad considering my health, buying salad at the resturant is twice expensive than making at home. Therfore, I think home-cooking is not a choice but to do.
강사 첨삭
Happy Midweek, Mary! You explained your preference clearly, and your example about salad was very effective and easy to understand. I like how you connected food choices with money and health, which shows practical thinking. To improve, focus on adding missing verbs, using articles like “a” and “the,” and choosing more natural expressions such as “reduce spending” instead of direct translations. Overall, your ideas were logical and well organized, and your writing is becoming more natural. Keep up the good work and keep practicing, your improvement is very clear.
-Teacher Wela
If the fast-food includes all if the food eating out, then I prefer to eat out when I have enough money.
>> If fast food includes all food eaten outside, I prefer eating out when I have enough money.
Actually, the cost for fast-food going higher and higher.
>> However, the cost of fast food has been increasing more and more.
If someone try to save his consumption, decreasing the number of eating out is effective.
>> If someone wants to reduce their spending, decreasing the number of times they eat out is effective.
Like this, home-cooked meals usually cheaper than fast-food.
>> In this sense, home-cooked meals are usually cheaper than fast food.
For example, when I want to eat salad considering my health, buying salad at the resturant is twice expensive than making at home.
>> For example, when I want to eat salad for health reasons, buying a salad at a restaurant is twice as expensive as making it at home.
>> For example, when I want to eat salad for health reasons, buying a salad at a restaurant is twice as expensive as making it at home.
Therfore, I think home-cooking is not a choice but to do.
>> Therefore, I think home cooking is not just a choice but a necessity.
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