Do you prefer living in an apartment or living in a house with a backyard? Why so?
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I prefer living in an apartment because of the infrastructure, and, convenience of the apartment. Apartments structure, and position of the rooms are built, conveniently for everybody. Also, there is many restaurants,hospital, and shops we can easily use near apartment so I prefer apartment more.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. I also want to experience living in an apartment.
I prefer living in an apartment because of the infrastructure, and, convenience of the apartment.
>>> OR: I prefer living in an apartment because of the infrastructure and convenience an apartment can offer.
Apartments structure, and position of the rooms are built, conveniently for everybody.
>>> Apartments\' structure, and the position of the rooms are built conveniently for everybody.
Also, there is many restaurants,hospital, and shops we can easily use near apartment so I prefer apartment more.
>>> Also, there are many restaurants, hospitals, and shops we can easily use near apartments, so I prefer an apartment more.
>>> OR: Also, there are many facilities such as restaurants, hospitals, and shops we can easily use near apartments, so I prefer an apartment more.
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