Do you prefer living in the city or in the country? Why? Do you like the location of your home?
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Living in the city or the country has its merits and faults. I prefer the city over the country from a large number of amenities. With my dislike of nature from the insects and tranquility, I do not wish to sacrifice the convenience brought by public transportation and leisure facility. I found out that getting access to anything without a driver\'s license in the countryside is very challenging, but it is possible with subways and buses. The most difficult part when studying in Canada was that I could not grab a Starbucks and McDonald\'s without a car. In a sense, I love my home location with the direct subway access and a large shopping center nearby. There are some disadvantages such as traffic congestion at 10 pm with cars picking up children from private school and long-waiting line in most restaurants. However, I understand that this level of convenience is difficult in the countryside, so it is worth sacrificing.
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Thanks for this Aciel!
Living in the city or the country has its merits and faults.
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I prefer the city over the country from a large number of amenities.
>>> OR: I prefer the city over the country due to a large number of amenities.
With my dislike of nature from the insects and tranquility, I do not wish to sacrifice the convenience brought by public transportation and leisure facility.
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I found out that getting access to anything without a driver\'s license in the countryside is very challenging, but it is possible with subways and buses.
>>> correct
The most difficult part when studying in Canada was that I could not grab a Starbucks and McDonald\'s without a car.
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In a sense, I love my home location with the direct subway access and a large shopping center nearby.
>>> correct
There are some disadvantages such as traffic congestion at 10 pm with cars picking up children from private school and long-waiting line in most restaurants.
>>> correct
However, I understand that this level of convenience is difficult in the countryside, so it is worth sacrificing.
>>> correct
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