Do you prefer mornings or evenings? How do you usually start and end your day?

2026-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I Prefer mornings. I usually wake up around 6:30 a.m. and go to bed 11:00 p.m. I usually start my day early because I can focused in the morning. When I wake up in the morning I check my schedule and I go to at work. I start wor after I have a light break fast in company cafeteria. finsh work 5 p.m. I usually go back to home. Iand end my day by talking with my wife. I sometimes go for a walk riverside park near my home. overall, having a calm evening priovide me start the next morning.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jason!

You started out great.

Take note of the other sentences.

I made sure I gave you the best way to make them more clear.

Be careful of sentence patterns and prepositions.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I Prefer mornings.

>> I prefer mornings.
I usually wake up around 6:30 a.m. and go to bed 11:00 p.m.

>> I usually wake up around 6:30 a.m. and go to bed at 11:00 p.m.
I usually start my day early because I can focused in the morning.

>> I usually start my day early because I can focus better in the morning.
When I wake up in the morning I check my schedule and I go to at work.

>> When I wake up in the morning, I check my schedule and go to work.
I start wor after I have a light break fast in company cafeteria.

>> I start work after I have a light breakfast in the company cafeteria.
finsh work 5 p.m.

>> I finish work at 5:00 p.m.
I usually go back to home. Iand end my day by talking with my wife.

>> I usually go back home and end my day by talking with my wife.
I sometimes go for a walk riverside park near my home.

>> I sometimes go for a walk at the riverside park near my home.
overall, having a calm evening priovide me start the next morning.

>> Overall, having a calm evening helps me start the next morning well.

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