Do you prefer package tours, or making your own trip?
학생이 쓴 원문
Basically I prefer making my own trip.
When I trip on my own , I can make my itinerary accoding to my conditions and schedule.
I can more concentrate on my interesting, appreciate about what I see and what I visit.
However every trip can\'t go on my own.
Because it need much more time for making itinerary,money and high tension during traveling to unfamiliar place.
Thus I usually go on two own-travel out of three.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for writing your composition. I also like making my own itinerary. :)
When I trip on my own , I can make my itinerary accoding to my conditions and schedule.
I can more concentrate on my interesting, appreciate about what I see and what I visit.
However every trip can\'t go on my own. Because it need much more time for making itinerary,money and high tension during traveling to unfamiliar place.
Thus I usually go on two own-travel out of three.
T.JAMIE
Basically I prefer making my own trip.
>>Basically, I prefer making my own trips.
When I trip on my own , I can make my itinerary accoding to my conditions and schedule.
>>When I travel on my own, I can create my itinerary according to my conditions and schedule.
>> I can concentrate more on my interests and appreciate what I see and visit.
>> However, not every trip can be done on my own because it requires much more time and money to plan the itinerary, and traveling to unfamiliar places can be stressful.
>> Thus, I usually go on two self-guided trips out of three.
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