Do you prefer receiving a letter through e-mail or a hand written letter?

2019-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Of course, I prefer to receive a hand written letter. A hand written a letter is full of sincerity . There is a day \"Teacher\'s Day\"in Korea. At that day I recived a hand written letters from my students. The letter is full of painting and sentences of thankful. Normally I didn\'t know, after I see letters I knew warm heart of my students and I felt how they feel about me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. This is why gratitude and appreciation should be expressed, so the other person would know and feel it.
- T. Beth
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Of course, I prefer to receive a hand written letter. 
>>> correct  
A hand written a letter is full of sincerity .
>>> OR:  
A hand written letter is filled with sincerity .  
There is a day \"Teacher\'s Day\"in Korea. 
>>>  OR:  There is a day called \"Teacher\'s Day\" in Korea. 
At that day I recived a hand written letters from my students.
>>> At that day, I received hand written letters from my students. 
The letter is full of painting and sentences of thankful.
>>>  OR: The letters are full of paintings and sentences of thankfulness. 
>>>  OR: The letters are filled with paintings and sentences of gratitude. 
Normally I didn\'t know, after I see letters I knew warm heart of my students and I felt how they feel about me.
>>>  I wouldn\'t usually know, but after reading those letters,  I felt the warm heart of my students and I felt how they feel about me.

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