Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones?
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I more prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing.
I love to do nothing on my weekend.Even if i do nothing, i feel at ease and calm than doing nothing in rest time on weekdays.
These days, i feel my heart is full when i do active ones on weekend.
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I more prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing. I love to do nothing on my weekend.
>> I prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing. I love to do nothing on my weekends.
Even if i do nothing, i feel at ease and calm than doing nothing in rest time on weekdays.
>> Even if I do nothing, I feel more at ease and calm than doing nothing during my free time on weekdays.
These days, i feel my heart is full when i do active ones on weekend.
>> These days, I feel like my heart is full when I do physical activities on weekends.
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