Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones? How do they give you joy and comfort?
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I prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing. I just spend my time doing static activities to accumulate my energy like doing nothing, reading books, or watching TV. It makes me concentrate my inner energy and it is helpful to working on weekdays.
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I prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing.
>> CORRECT!
I just spend my time doing static activities to accumulate my energy like doing nothing, reading books, or watching TV.
>> CORRECT!It makes me concentrate my inner energy and it is helpful to working on weekdays.
>> It makes me concentrate om my inner energy, and it is helpful for working on weekdays.
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