Do you prefer shopping online or offline? Why?
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I'm sorry that I missed your call today. I didn't hear the alarm and phone ringing. Maybe I was very tired. Because my best friend plans to leave the Chun cheon today. So we played and enjoyed over night. haha....That was problem...I'm so sorry for that.
Let's talk about a homework. In conclusion, I prefer shopping offline. When I was young I prefered internet shopping. But I'm going to fail the online shopping and exhausted to wait the thing, I start to hate that and stopped. So I love shopping to see directly and buy it. I'm crazily happy with heavy shopping bags in my hands when I went home.:-)
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Good morning!
It\'s okay [이름]. I just hope you can answer my call today. ^_^
Anyway, thanks for sharing your preference.
I also prefer shopping offline. ^_^ It relieves our stress and at the same time, we can try the clothes to see if it really suits us.
Well, we better continue talking later. See you!
~T. Jessie~
I\'m sorry that I missed your call today.
>> Correct!
I didn\'t hear the alarm and phone ringing.
>> I didn\'t hear the alarm and the phone ringing.
Maybe I was very tired.
>> Correct!
Because my best friend plans to leave the Chun cheon today.
>> Because my best friend plans to leave Chun cheon today.
So we played and enjoyed over night. haha....
>> Correct!
That was problem...
>> That was the problem...
I\'m so sorry for that.
>> Correct!Let\'s talk about a homework.
>> Let\'s talk about the homework.
In conclusion, I prefer shopping offline. >> Correct!
When I was young I prefered internet shopping.
>> When I was young I preferred internet shopping.
But I\'m going to fail the online shopping and exhausted to wait the thing, I start to hate that and stopped.
>> Do you mean: But I got exhausted waiting for the thing so I started to hate that and stopped.
So I love shopping to see directly and buy it. >> Correct!
I\'m crazily happy with heavy shopping bags in my hands when I went home.:-)
>> Correct!
OR>> I\'m crazily happy with heavy shopping bags in my hands when I go home.:-)
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