Do you prefer small gatherings or big celebrations? Explain.
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I prefer small getherings .
They make people closer each other.
It\"s better that is communicated with others.
However,big celebrations are necessary depending on the situation.
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I prefer small getherings .
>> I prefer small gatherings.
They make people closer each other.
They make people closer each other.
>> They make people closer to each other.
It\"s better that is communicated with others.
It\"s better that is communicated with others.
>> It\'s better because they can communicate with others.
However,big celebrations are necessary depending on the situation.
However,big celebrations are necessary depending on the situation.
>> However, big celebrations are necessary depending on the situation.
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