Do you prefer small gatherings or big celebrations? Explain.
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I prefer small gatherings more than bigger one.
Big celebrations is too crowed so it\'s tough to concentrate on.
It looks like just huge show, it\'s not a real gathering.
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I prefer small gatherings more than bigger one.
>> I prefer small gatherings to bigger ones.
Big celebrations is too crowed so it\'s tough to concentrate on.
>> Big celebrations are too crowded, so it’s hard to concentrate.
It looks like just huge show, it\'s not a real gathering.
>> They often feel like a huge show rather than a real gathering.
>> I prefer small gatherings to bigger ones.
Big celebrations is too crowed so it\'s tough to concentrate on.
>> Big celebrations are too crowded, so it’s hard to concentrate.
It looks like just huge show, it\'s not a real gathering.
>> They often feel like a huge show rather than a real gathering.
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