Do you prefer solo hobbies or ones you can share with others?
학생이 쓴 원문
i prefer to hobby share with others.
my hobby was gone fitness center with co-worker.
i was excercise with co-worker, we are compared each other.
and we were work hard to excercise together.
but my co-worker stopped excercise one day, so i stopped excercise too.
sure of i can excercise alone but i was lack of persistence.
it\'s my problem. but if share hobby together, can long term and enjoy together hobby .
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I agree that doing a hobby with others can add fun and motivation. It\'s sad that he stopped working out, and you also lost the will to do it.
Hopefully, in the future, you can find another person with whom you can share the same hobby, especially since exercising is a healthy one.
Hopefully, in the future, you can find another person with whom you can share the same hobby, especially since exercising is a healthy one.
- T. Caitlyn
i prefer to hobby share with others.
>> I prefer to share my hobbies with others.
my hobby was gone fitness center with co-worker.
my hobby was gone fitness center with co-worker.
>> My hobby was going to the fitness center with a co-worker.
i was excercise with co-worker, we are compared each other.
i was excercise with co-worker, we are compared each other.
>> I exercised with my co-worker, and we compared ourselves to each other.
and we were work hard to excercise together.
and we were work hard to excercise together.
>> We worked hard to exercise together.
but my co-worker stopped excercise one day, so i stopped excercise too.
but my co-worker stopped excercise one day, so i stopped excercise too.
>> But my co-worker stopped exercising one day, so I stopped exercising too.
sure of i can excercise alone but i was lack of persistence.
sure of i can excercise alone but i was lack of persistence.
>> Sure, I can exercise alone, but I lack persistence.
it\'s my problem.
it\'s my problem.
>> CORRECT
but if share hobby together, can long term and enjoy together hobby .
>> But if we share a hobby together, we can continue long-term and enjoy it more.
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