Do you prefer spending time alone or with others? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer spending time alone rather than with others. Until I was a teenager, I used to like spend time with others. I necessarily had to have a meal with someone and participate in some activities with friends. However, as I grow up and mature, I became more comfortable and relaxed when I am alone by focusing on myself and my routine. I can take a walk, go running or listening music alone. These activities give me a peaceful feeling. However, I believe that most people periodically need to spend time with others. In my case, I occasionally have to meet people and hang out. Unless, I feel isolated and lonely, and I might become a bit narrow-minded. By interacting with others, I can learn various perspectives and clearly perceive myself. Therefore, It would be desirable to regulate the frequency of meeting based of each one\'s personalities.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
No man is an island. Even if solitude gives us peace, socializing every once in a while keeps us connected, refreshed, and aware of different perspectives. It’s that balance between alone time and shared time that helps us grow both inwardly and outwardly.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I prefer spending time alone rather than with others.
~ CORRECT.
Until I was a teenager, I used to like spend time with others.
~ Until I was a teenager, I used to like spending time with others.
I necessarily had to have a meal with someone and participate in some activities with friends.
~ CORRECT.
However, as I grow up and mature, I became more comfortable and relaxed when I am alone by focusing on myself and my routine.
~ However, as I grew up and matured, I became more comfortable and relaxed when I was alone, focusing on myself and my routine.
I can take a walk, go running or listening music alone.
~ I can take a walk, go running, or listen to music alone.
These activities give me a peaceful feeling.
~ CORRECT.
However, I believe that most people periodically need to spend time with others.
~ CORRECT.
In my case, I occasionally have to meet people and hang out.
~ CORRECT.
Unless, I feel isolated and lonely, and I might become a bit narrow-minded.
~ Otherwise, I feel isolated and lonely, and I might become a bit narrow-minded.
By interacting with others, I can learn various perspectives and clearly perceive myself.
~ CORRECT.
Therefore, It would be desirable to regulate the frequency of meeting based of each one\'s personalities.
~ Therefore, it would be desirable to regulate the frequency of meetings based on each person’s personality.
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