Do you prefer sweet or savory food? Why? Give examples.
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually like normal tasty food.
Sometimes, I enjoy both of them depending on my mood.
I eat sweet food,like an ice cream,chocolate and candy,cookie
when I\'m feeling down and exhausted to get energy.
On some days, I have savory food ,like pizza,french fry,and spicy fried chicken.
I need to try something different food.
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I usually like normal tasty food.
>> I usually like simple and tasty food.
Sometimes, I enjoy both of them depending on my mood.
Sometimes, I enjoy both of them depending on my mood.
>> Correct
I eat sweet food,like an ice cream,chocolate and candy,cookie when I\'m feeling down and exhausted to get energy.
I eat sweet food,like an ice cream,chocolate and candy,cookie when I\'m feeling down and exhausted to get energy.
>> I eat sweet food like ice cream, chocolate, candy, and cookies when I\'m feeling down and exhausted to get energy.
On some days, I have savory food ,like pizza,french fry,and spicy fried chicken.
On some days, I have savory food ,like pizza,french fry,and spicy fried chicken.
>> On some days, I have savory food like pizza, French fries, and spicy fried chicken.
I need to try something different food.
I need to try something different food.
>> I need to try different kinds of food.
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