Do you prefer taking pictures with a phone or a camera? Why?
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I like taking a picture with my phone.
Because I always carry my phone and it\'s very convenient to use.
If it\"s not an art work.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I like taking a picture with my phone.
>> I like taking pictures with my phone.
Because I always carry my phone and it\'s very convenient to use.
Because I always carry my phone and it\'s very convenient to use.
>> It\'s because I always carry my phone and it\'s very convenient to use.
If it\"s not an art work.
If it\"s not an art work.
>> The photos I take are not artwork.
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