Do you prefer the idea of extended or nuclear families?
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Hmmmmm, I just like families who are close to me and take care about each other whether be nuclear families or not. You know, I\'m sick of relatives who are greedy about the money as you told last class. Also, my parents have been sicking about that [이름]ce my grandfather was gone. So, whether it\'s a big family or not, I like families who live together. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Hmmmmm, I just like families who are close to me and take care about each other whether be nuclear families or not.
>> CORRECT!You know, I\'m sick of relatives who are greedy about the money as you told last class.
>> CORRECT!Also, my parents have been sicking about that [이름]ce my grandfather was gone.
>> Also, my parents have been sick about that [이름]ce my grandfather was gone.
So, whether it\'s a big family or not, I like families who live together. :)
>> CORRECT!
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